Great story! but if i were u, i would not add to many things that you don’t need. Here are my edits:
There lived a special and intelligent girl. She lived with her only and loved parent, which WAS her mother. Her father died in a hideous death that no one in the village liked to talk ABOUT. As he MET his end everyone could not believe it.
Great story! but if i were u, i would not add to many things that you don’t need. Here are my edits:
There lived a special and intelligent girl. She lived with her only and loved parent, which WAS her mother. Her father died in a hideous death that no one in the village liked to talk ABOUT. As he MET his end everyone could not believe it.
That was me WAL-E
wow sooooo much information
Thank You Waleed And who else commented ?